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Review Detail of Alcheluk in The Abandoned Hunter

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Alcheluk
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Sorry author but simply can’t keep promise to write review after chapter 40. Being inspired by other novel is great, however you almost copied the first few chapters will all the action included; it felft more like information dump than proper introduction to story. Early chapters lacks worldbuidling or emotions of MC, just some brief *thinking*. I personally think you went a little overboard with how the system works for MC. Almost perfect way to survive without doing much. Hope it gets better at later stages. Would love to see more review of peaople who are on ongoing chapters.

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The Abandoned Hunter

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