Review Detail of Raven_Crowley in My Hero Academia: Quirkless

Good grammar and sentence structure. Could still be improved, but nevertheless good writing. The story however is barely mediocre, started off with good premise, the action scenes were clean and easily understandable, but then the romance came and the writing was bad and cringey, even though they are in a fictional japan, Japanese people don't do public display of affection. And who kisses in the middle of the sports festival when you are in front of live television especially when you are 14-15 year old students? TL:DR Good grammar and action sequences, but cringey romance