Author, here! If you have any questions about the story, ask here. My discord is https://discord.gg//4QhEQgpWxu Disclaimer: The beginning is rough with story plot problems, I apologize, I am trying to improve. MC will be dating a female and male, if that is not your taste, please drop my story with no hate. Relationship is PG. Only profanity and fighting is R18.
RJMidnight
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LIKEnot really terrible, I can ignore the few plotholes in the early chaps. but its just Im straight male I imagine myself to be the mc. if i see the mc leering or dating another dude it feels weird and off-putting to me, makes me cringe sometimes
RJMidnight:It is fine. You can have your opinion. Even if I can go back in time, I will never change my decision on the MC’s sexuality. And it is not like I’m showing smut, everything is PG except for the fighting and profanity in this story. I think this story is terrible (it gets better in the locked chapters), so the MC’s sexuality would change nothing. Still, that is why I put warnings to stop people from continuing if they cannot stand a MC dating a female and male at the same time.
BunnyFF:Uh. When you said that mc was bisexual, did you mean that he’ll eventually have a relationship with a man? (Not against gays or anything, just curious)
Becuase the first arc is a mess (it started to get better in the second arc and locked chapters) and my grammar lol. And it is not 4.5, I believe it came out to a 4.2 but you know WN doesn’t show that.
Tidal479:Why did you only give your story 4.5 five stars? Random question but I'm curious.
I will say Arc One is bad because I never written about dungeons before so there are plot holes and such. Arc Two and so on gets better and I start explaining more things (although most explanations are in the locked chapters).
Li_Kuu:hohoho only 150 but if story is good I'm in. Thanks for your story I'm looking this.
Depends, on a good day, about 1.7k words, but other than that, 1.5k words each time. My complete average out of all the chapters I currently have is 1.73k words.
InkLone:how many words do you usually put in a chapter?
The date on WN is wrong cause I started on RoyalRoad before deleting and putting here for the contract. I honestly don’t remember. I want to say Nov, but it could have been late October.
InkLone:when did you start this novel
Well with the contract, WN attracted people. I had a book here that I started a while back. It took 6 months to get 400 collection (it did not follow cliche things that people like on WN though). It is completed but im losing collections cause I took the chapters away since the story is on amazon and other book sites.
InkLone:I'm really curious because I'm writing a novel myself and I dont know if it's going well or.. not.