Review Detail of Jay_Blu in Rightful Vengeance

The novel has a very interesting and rather unique concept where the world is created and dominated by God's, who themselves have even created the seasons. Not only that, but the character and the kingdom she lives in are pretty much werewolves. The prologue also gives a sense of tragedy where the protagonist's parents are murdered before she could even get to know them enough to care. I do have to say although, from reading the first two chapters it's a little hard to tell who's speaking. Names arent addressed when using quotes to tell when someone talks. I also feel there is room for improvement with character design. When writing, its always good to think about what actions or ways of thinking and speaking a specific character can do or have to make them more discernable.