Writing Quality: fine. Stability of Updates: okay. Story Development: Okay at start, but gets worse as time goes on. mc recovers some strength, lose it 2 - 3 chapters later cause someone over half a milion years old is too emotionaly unstable. Character Design: bad, all characters have no motivation what so ever for what they do and most of the feel like a bunch of 15 - 20 year olds who still don't know what the word being calm and clear minded means. I mean, it kinda breaks the imersion when a bunch of gods who lived for hundreds of thousands of years acts like some naive teenager who havn't seen the world. World Background: ok, nothing special. Would like more descriptions surrounding the world, so we know how it looks like. Comment: sorry for the rant. Think the novel has potential and was overall okay. Hope it will improve.
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