Review Detail of Apathetic_Sloth in Villain Lady
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First of all, thanks for the wonderful story you've given us author! I'm very grateful I discovered this and now I have another great story to look forward to. I love the MC. Her personality and attitude makes me want to cheer her on and hope alongside her that she can have a peaceful life. It draws me in to sympathize and somewhat relate to her I guess? idk how to explain lol (like bruh I ain't in ancient times haha) She has a passive attitude to anything and everyone (even when mistreated), so I really feel for her maids lol. (Can I send some bitch slap to her shit family? I think they deserve it. And of course some love and support for the MC!) Anyways I'm looking forward to seeing her life improve but I know she has to suffer first just reading the synopsis. (I'm worrying about a fictional character lol whats happening). If I'm feeling like that, it means the author did a great job portraying the MC for the readers to feel attached to her so there's that. World background I don't know much about (I don't really pay attention to those things so I don't have info on that, sorry haha). Also there's some grammar mistakes but its not that bothering compared to others here so I still give the writing quality a 5. Its just some occasional wrong use of words but you won't even notice it most of the time. (Honestly i mean who am I to judge lol look at these confusing paragraphs) I just binge read it in one day so there's really not much about other categories but even though its only a few chapters I'm already hooked in. (Great job author! Thanks for the hard work. I hope you continue this awesome story!) P.S. Jesus christ. Rereading this right now and... I'm sorry for anyone unfortunate reading this incomprehensible babble lol. (I just wanna give the author my review haha)
Villain Lady
Sorahana
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A***, you're welcome 🤗 I'm happy to hear that you like the story even though it's only in the beginning phrase. Thank you very much for such a long and nice review. (lol, I guess I'm included in the unfortunate person who read the review 😂) I'm still improving in my own grammar and it's nice to read such a review 😊. Also, don't worry, I plan to continue writing the story 🤗 (though, I can't give stable updates for now 🤔) Once again, thank you for the review. I hope you'll enjoy the rest of the story 🤗❤️ from the author who unfortunately read review 😉😂 lol, Sorahana 💙
Just letting you know, you should change the cover. Your story is Chinese, but although the hair is wrong (no matter where), the clothing is 100% Japanese. It should be a Hanfu. This does actually matter enough to warrant a change
Sorahana:A***, you're welcome 🤗 I'm happy to hear that you like the story even though it's only in the beginning phrase. Thank you very much for such a long and nice review. (lol, I guess I'm included in the unfortunate person who read the review 😂) I'm still improving in my own grammar and it's nice to read such a review 😊. Also, don't worry, I plan to continue writing the story 🤗 (though, I can't give stable updates for now 🤔) Once again, thank you for the review. I hope you'll enjoy the rest of the story 🤗❤️ from the author who unfortunately read review 😉😂 lol, Sorahana 💙
Er, I was following Chinese clothing style that I found in internet, tho? From BC period timeline 😅 tho, I had to admit that my drawing is not good...
YulongYuXianTaiyin:Just letting you know, you should change the cover. Your story is Chinese, but although the hair is wrong (no matter where), the clothing is 100% Japanese. It should be a Hanfu. This does actually matter enough to warrant a change
Sorry, but that really is Japanese because of the sash/belt that you might not have intended. Anyone would think Japanese with that style. It's up to you to change it, especially since it was your own work and you'd have more feelings for it. If you do decide to change it, just look up Han Dynasty hanfu for older versions (you said BC) and Tang Dynasty Hanfu for a big enough change so there's no similarity to Kimono/Yukata
Sorahana:Er, I was following Chinese clothing style that I found in internet, tho? From BC period timeline 😅 tho, I had to admit that my drawing is not good...
YulongYuXianTaiyin:Sorry, but that really is Japanese because of the sash/belt that you might not have intended. Anyone would think Japanese with that style. It's up to you to change it, especially since it was your own work and you'd have more feelings for it. If you do decide to change it, just look up Han Dynasty hanfu for older versions (you said BC) and Tang Dynasty Hanfu for a big enough change so there's no similarity to Kimono/Yukata