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okay I personally at the beginning loved this book. The fact that the MC is a battle maniac, how realistic he seems and that he uses a glaive. It started when he comprehended Chaos there were some scenes where it shows it's importance but also restricts him(I don't know bout it now but I stopped reading at the middle 450s I think) but there was no depth to it after that. Then his strength, he seemed plenty strong at the beginning, he surprised me with sunder the heavens and I was also kinda hoping he'd take space over chaos(it's kinda overused) but it was still good he was ruthless yet realistic and humane, I liked that. But after he leaves started getting a headache his soul is tearing or something he is still in the spirit realm although I personally love OP MCs, I hoped he would grow but he has gone and grown through countless things that people would never go through and he seem out of character and never grows in strength I understand that growing in realms grows harder the higher you grow but it's been almost 500 chapters and he's still in the spirit or origin realm that's like the second or third realm! I wanna read this book again but I wanna know if anything changed. Please try to respond as fast you can Author.
The Dawn of the New World
Shinigami8671
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Alright, so a few things. 1. He's at the spirit realm currently which is the 5th realm (not 2nd or 3rd) and has gone through several qualitative evolutions (including the most recent one at ch 764) where the SCOPE of his abilities has grown considerably rather a simple addition of realms. I know it may not sound much but from the very beginning I have put a very little distinction between each realm mainly because I don't like such a rigid cultivation system. I want it to be as realistic as possible and I personally don't believe anything can be that simple IRL. Meaning there are a LOT of other variables in play like bloodlines, physiques, native elemental affinities, psychic powers, etc that can help a person go beyond their original realm and fight much more powerful opponents. Right now Hao Xuan has acquired a lot of them and now his power will start to increase substantially. 2. Chaos, especially how I've written it, actually includes almost all other elements in one way or another. By using that, Hao Xuan has gotten not one but an entire arsenal, which will be pretty clear around 765 chapter since he will be fighting the 'Children of Gods' in a way after that point. 3. This story arc where he is on another planet, it is mainly focused on the plot and setting up for the future when Hao Xuan actually gains true power. That's why it has been rather slow. I wish I had more time to write so I could churn out more content and bigger chapters to get it over with quickly but alas, it is not meant to be. (Part 1/2)
-Continued: That's why it has been rather slow. I wish I had more time to write so I could churn out more content and bigger chapters to get it over with quickly but alas, it is not meant to be. On a personal note, I probably like OP characters more than any of my readers, but I don't like it when they don't deserve the power that's given to them or they don't earn it. It NEEDS to make sense. I don't want to write something like "MC was walking and just stumbled onto a hidden treasure" without a valid reason, of which there are plenty. It will soon be unveiled who is behind the curtain and how nothing has been a coincidence but a calculated path chosen for him. I hope you don't give up on the novel so easily but I wouldn't blame you either atm. I want to make him OP (in a sense) but not without reason so it will take some time. But if you find the novel boring then by all means this is a good time to just drop it. WN is chock full of OP system novels so there is no shortage of in this genre, although it will be a shame.
shinigami8671:Alright, so a few things. 1. He's at the spirit realm currently which is the 5th realm (not 2nd or 3rd) and has gone through several qualitative evolutions (including the most recent one at ch 764) where the SCOPE of his abilities has grown considerably rather a simple addition of realms. I know it may not sound much but from the very beginning I have put a very little distinction between each realm mainly because I don't like such a rigid cultivation system. I want it to be as realistic as possible and I personally don't believe anything can be that simple IRL. Meaning there are a LOT of other variables in play like bloodlines, physiques, native elemental affinities, psychic powers, etc that can help a person go beyond their original realm and fight much more powerful opponents. Right now Hao Xuan has acquired a lot of them and now his power will start to increase substantially. 2. Chaos, especially how I've written it, actually includes almost all other elements in one way or another. By using that, Hao Xuan has gotten not one but an entire arsenal, which will be pretty clear around 765 chapter since he will be fighting the 'Children of Gods' in a way after that point. 3. This story arc where he is on another planet, it is mainly focused on the plot and setting up for the future when Hao Xuan actually gains true power. That's why it has been rather slow. I wish I had more time to write so I could churn out more content and bigger chapters to get it over with quickly but alas, it is not meant to be. (Part 1/2)