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Review Detail of Nihirvana in The Dawn of the New World

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Nihirvana
NihirvanaLv133yrNihirvana

I'm sorry but I just can't take it anymore this novel is a cluster f**k of ideas a d sub plots that NEVER go anywhere. the author literally tries to give the MC everything like everything on top of everything and just when you think oh kool is gonna be OP nope he gets his ass kicked and dragged into a bunch of crap honestly I don't even think this a story about the MC I think he just gets dragged around and into crap over and over and over again half it just doesn't even make sense. it's pretty pathetic. this novel has potential but it lacks focus.

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The Dawn of the New World

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cctvWHat
cctvWHatLv5cctvWHat

So basically is the MC considered as OP or not?

MikaRainblow
MikaRainblowLv5MikaRainblow

The technical term for this is Lack of Agency.

Tami_Gosney_2315
Tami_Gosney_2315Lv12Tami_Gosney_2315

if you really read the story, it explains things that were obviously intentionally left unexplained in the boning to reveal a bigger picture later. I thing this actually shows the author has a great imagination and is able to think ahead and not risk through events and circumstances, giving the reader a build up of emotions, disappointments and expectations before allowing a unexpected and satisfying climax to later in the plot instead of a rushed and mediocre telling of a story just like millions already told. just my opinion as an avid reader. 😁

mujaki2
mujaki2Lv15mujaki2

no matter how op he gets, situations occur that make him seem like a hopeless fool for comedy.

cctvWHat:So basically is the MC considered as OP or not?