Review Detail of lSwordsmanl in The Dawn of the New World
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This us a good novel, that's something that i should put out first, but it's not a novel for me, the beggining of the development of the novel i'd say it's among the best, but then comes the twist of him getting kidnaped and revaling all of that where he has at least 2 other personalities inside him that are problably super OP just from what we saw, and here the novel died for me, because there's no danger anymore, there's no doubt if the MC will get strong or not, it's such a strong plot device that the author can do whatever he wants, i don't know how the story develops, and i won't try to read it, another thing that made me make this decision was the personality shown of the other one inside him, and him losing his memories ( i saw that he regains them before 100 chapters in the comment section, but it did not change my will to drop it), now what is his motivation to get stronger? for me it's gone alongside with his memories, once again i'll say that it's a good novel, just not a good novel for me, i can see the effort that the author put into this novel, so it is a great novel, reading what i did was was enjoyable. P.S: Sorry if the grammar and writing is not good, as english is not my first language.
The Dawn of the New World
Shinigami8671
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1. Thank you for the 4 stars and being one of the rare people that understand that not everything is for them, but just because it isn't doesn't mean it's bad either. 2. Since you won't be reading any further I'd like to clarify a few things because you seem to have taken the first impression too literally, but only because it will bother me if you leave with the wrong idea. Again, major SPOILER for anyone else intending on reading the novel. The personalities that are mentioned in the first few chapters aren't actually that. It's true there are 2 other "entities" inside Hao Xuan's mind palace but they are not his personalities. One of them is an ancient demonic being that is only using his soul as a "rent-free" house, a parasite so to speak, and the other IS a part of him, but it's not a different personality as you might think, nor is it OP in any way. It's just a different side of him, one that he hated so much that he chose to close off and forget about it entirely because of something traumatic that happened to him when he was very young. I absolutely LOVE writing about a number of different unique scenarios, most of which are rendered useless if the MC is too OP. Neither of the personalities are OP, they are just 'shown' as such. Demons lie, and that is a big part of the novel. As for the reason for him to get stronger, there isn't one as you would expect in a normal novel. But the events of the novel's first arc (that is still going on at 610+ chapters) will GIVE him that reason, one that isn't so easily forgotten nor shallow enough to be more or less meaningless. But revealing all this naturally takes a lot of time, especially since I am still quite inexperienced. Some of these above-mentioned things have already been hinted at several times in the novel but since you won't be reading it, I thought I should tell you myself. I hope you find a novel good enough to leave you without any complaints and if/when you do find one, please let me know as well :) Happy reading!
yeah, i noticed that some things are not good for everyone with the disscussion about TLOU 2, so i took it to my life, if someone doesn't like something that i like is not the end of the world and vice-versa. About the novel, reading what you told me, i might give it another try, but i was kinda pissed when i wrote the review, more because of the "you're mine" thing, while the girls were only taking a bath, that's something that i really despise in our society, so when i saw it on the protagonist i got kinda pissed, but with what you said about it, i don't know anymore, i might give it another try, and see how you develop the internal conflict of the protagonist with this thing. I'll see, but thanks for the attention.
shinigami8671:1. Thank you for the 4 stars and being one of the rare people that understand that not everything is for them, but just because it isn't doesn't mean it's bad either. 2. Since you won't be reading any further I'd like to clarify a few things because you seem to have taken the first impression too literally, but only because it will bother me if you leave with the wrong idea. Again, major SPOILER for anyone else intending on reading the novel. The personalities that are mentioned in the first few chapters aren't actually that. It's true there are 2 other "entities" inside Hao Xuan's mind palace but they are not his personalities. One of them is an ancient demonic being that is only using his soul as a "rent-free" house, a parasite so to speak, and the other IS a part of him, but it's not a different personality as you might think, nor is it OP in any way. It's just a different side of him, one that he hated so much that he chose to close off and forget about it entirely because of something traumatic that happened to him when he was very young. I absolutely LOVE writing about a number of different unique scenarios, most of which are rendered useless if the MC is too OP. Neither of the personalities are OP, they are just 'shown' as such. Demons lie, and that is a big part of the novel. As for the reason for him to get stronger, there isn't one as you would expect in a normal novel. But the events of the novel's first arc (that is still going on at 610+ chapters) will GIVE him that reason, one that isn't so easily forgotten nor shallow enough to be more or less meaningless. But revealing all this naturally takes a lot of time, especially since I am still quite inexperienced. Some of these above-mentioned things have already been hinted at several times in the novel but since you won't be reading it, I thought I should tell you myself. I hope you find a novel good enough to leave you without any complaints and if/when you do find one, please let me know as well :) Happy reading!
Never expected to hear about TLOU 2 on webnovel lol, a man of culture you are it seems. And I'm glad to hear. If you do get the time to read, I would love to hear more of your opinion, especially until at least you reach the end of the free chapters.
lSwordsmanl:yeah, i noticed that some things are not good for everyone with the disscussion about TLOU 2, so i took it to my life, if someone doesn't like something that i like is not the end of the world and vice-versa. About the novel, reading what you told me, i might give it another try, but i was kinda pissed when i wrote the review, more because of the "you're mine" thing, while the girls were only taking a bath, that's something that i really despise in our society, so when i saw it on the protagonist i got kinda pissed, but with what you said about it, i don't know anymore, i might give it another try, and see how you develop the internal conflict of the protagonist with this thing. I'll see, but thanks for the attention.
shinigami8671:1. Thank you for the 4 stars and being one of the rare people that understand that not everything is for them, but just because it isn't doesn't mean it's bad either. 2. Since you won't be reading any further I'd like to clarify a few things because you seem to have taken the first impression too literally, but only because it will bother me if you leave with the wrong idea. Again, major SPOILER for anyone else intending on reading the novel. The personalities that are mentioned in the first few chapters aren't actually that. It's true there are 2 other "entities" inside Hao Xuan's mind palace but they are not his personalities. One of them is an ancient demonic being that is only using his soul as a "rent-free" house, a parasite so to speak, and the other IS a part of him, but it's not a different personality as you might think, nor is it OP in any way. It's just a different side of him, one that he hated so much that he chose to close off and forget about it entirely because of something traumatic that happened to him when he was very young. I absolutely LOVE writing about a number of different unique scenarios, most of which are rendered useless if the MC is too OP. Neither of the personalities are OP, they are just 'shown' as such. Demons lie, and that is a big part of the novel. As for the reason for him to get stronger, there isn't one as you would expect in a normal novel. But the events of the novel's first arc (that is still going on at 610+ chapters) will GIVE him that reason, one that isn't so easily forgotten nor shallow enough to be more or less meaningless. But revealing all this naturally takes a lot of time, especially since I am still quite inexperienced. Some of these above-mentioned things have already been hinted at several times in the novel but since you won't be reading it, I thought I should tell you myself. I hope you find a novel good enough to leave you without any complaints and if/when you do find one, please let me know as well :) Happy reading!
shinigami8671:Which family? His own? or the Khan's that he lived with after coming to the new world?