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shinigami8671
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Hi everyone, DNW's author here. Im sure many of you would be wondering how a novel has so many chapters and no reviews or comments, and that's because it had to be moved here after licensing. You can find the original here with most of the initial free chapters and all comments and reviews. https:// w w w .webnovel.com/book/the-dawn-of-the-new-world_11726558706492805

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The Dawn of the New World

Shinigami8671

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Daoist_BreakSky
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This novel is so shitty, you could just fuck off and stop writing so we can forget about it and start reading new novels better. You put too much information in your novel, its inconsistent with facts, too much mysteries and manipulation which anyone doesn't like. The way I see it mc had no hope, all his power and physique is the top notch of the universe and they were given to him and he can be manipulated through it or replace him or take it away. Even the chaos power is just top notch power and you made it look like average, even though his powers are topnotch they are still average and much more he can't use much of those powers and adding to my frustrations about this novel is his shitty cultivation pace, is it even a cultivation novel, you should a have place a "slice of life" genre there. He is freaking 25 but he is still at the spirit realm. Fuck you author you are a big disappointment.

Nikhil_Chand
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is this a harem? doesnt seem like it but this is an apocalypse novel so i thought i should ask

shinigami8671
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Not really, no. It's kind of difficult to answer without spoiling it but although there will be different partners, a harem (at least 3 women make constitute a harem) is not planned as of yet.

Nikhil_Chand:is this a harem? doesnt seem like it but this is an apocalypse novel so i thought i should ask
Nikhil_Chand
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its 560 chapters already and author says it is not planned as of yet :P

shinigami8671:Not really, no. It's kind of difficult to answer without spoiling it but although there will be different partners, a harem (at least 3 women make constitute a harem) is not planned as of yet.
shinigami8671
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Lol, when you actually get a chance to read you'll realize those numbers aren't much at all :D

Nikhil_Chand:its 560 chapters already and author says it is not planned as of yet :P
MrFalan
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need tags

shinigami8671
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WN only allows exclusive partners to add tags, which i am not, so cannot add them normally. But if u go the link where the old novel is, u can see the tags there.

MrFalan:need tags
Knights_Errant
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I thought everyone could add tags wtf

shinigami8671:WN only allows exclusive partners to add tags, which i am not, so cannot add them normally. But if u go the link where the old novel is, u can see the tags there.
shinigami8671
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Either unpartnered ones or fully exclusive partners could add them, which is why the older version under my account has them (since it was unpartnered). But this one is partially exclusive and I still have the full rights to the novel, so WN won't allow me even the most basic functions like adding tags or EVEN editing the synopsis.

Knights_Errant:I thought everyone could add tags wtf
shinigami8671
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Fire away.

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shinigami8671
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1. Discord is: shinigami8671#1944 2. Patreon is: https:// w w w .patreon.com/shinigami8671 I'm almost always on discord. Haven't used patreon in years since creating it. Just feels weird lol. 3. Glad to hear you're liking the story. The main reason I don't work with WN (even though I got contract offers twice before)is because they are too overbearing. If your novel isn't in the top 10 rankings already, the contract conditions are absolutely horrible. For me personally, they asked me to sign over FULL rights to this novel, EVERY OTHER piece I would write in the future, and anything else I could come up with. Also, they wanted creative control over the novel and I would have to first confirm every single chapter with THEM before posting it. If I had accepted, I would have been their slave, unless I wanted to throw the novel away for good. 4. I want the novel to be as realistic as possible when it comes to relationships and world-building, and harems are not realistic at ALL unless the MC is a tyrant or a king or something. No one wants to see their loved ones being with someone else, regardless of gender. This weird fantasy that a normal girl would be okay with you having multiple females partners is what makes most novels unreadable for me.

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LazyCloudBC
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Soooooooo no harem in the future I guess...

shinigami8671:1. Discord is: shinigami8671#1944 2. Patreon is: https:// w w w .patreon.com/shinigami8671 I'm almost always on discord. Haven't used patreon in years since creating it. Just feels weird lol. 3. Glad to hear you're liking the story. The main reason I don't work with WN (even though I got contract offers twice before)is because they are too overbearing. If your novel isn't in the top 10 rankings already, the contract conditions are absolutely horrible. For me personally, they asked me to sign over FULL rights to this novel, EVERY OTHER piece I would write in the future, and anything else I could come up with. Also, they wanted creative control over the novel and I would have to first confirm every single chapter with THEM before posting it. If I had accepted, I would have been their slave, unless I wanted to throw the novel away for good. 4. I want the novel to be as realistic as possible when it comes to relationships and world-building, and harems are not realistic at ALL unless the MC is a tyrant or a king or something. No one wants to see their loved ones being with someone else, regardless of gender. This weird fantasy that a normal girl would be okay with you having multiple females partners is what makes most novels unreadable for me.
UnPro
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You could just write the tags in a review or a reply.

lucasfischer
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Oi, onde está essas notas do autor? pra achar a imagens e tal.

shinigami8671
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Sorry I only speak English

lucasfischer:Oi, onde está essas notas do autor? pra achar a imagens e tal.
Ibuprofen
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dope, harems are absolute ass and plague so many potentially good novels 😪 Apocalyptic ones bearing most of that cringe fest, all the dudes who get swamp ass over having harems are even worse, they will swear on there ma's life that harems are good and realistic! Ptui! i spit on them.

shinigami8671
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Lmao, you sound like a close friend of mine.

Ibuprofen:dope, harems are absolute ass and plague so many potentially good novels 😪 Apocalyptic ones bearing most of that cringe fest, all the dudes who get swamp ass over having harems are even worse, they will swear on there ma's life that harems are good and realistic! Ptui! i spit on them.
Ibuprofen
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your friend is of good taste I presume 😎

shinigami8671:Lmao, you sound like a close friend of mine.
skidzee
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is this harem?

shinigami8671
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No atm. Check previous comments for details

skidzee:is this harem?
knijn
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hey im at chap 300 rn and im wondering why you put authors notes in the middle of the chapter like(ch46) or (check auxiliry chap) because it really takes the reader out of the story