bravo! bravo! finally another decent Star Wars story in this god forsaken website. Everything is good so far a bit rough on some areas but overall its good.
Daonexus
Liked it!
LIKEThanks for the review, if you do find any areas you feel can be polished please be sure to drop a comment with suggestions to improve. I swear I won't take it in a bad way or anything like that, because I generally treat my fanfics as a community project rather than something of my own and try to incorporate any feasible ideas into the story