Review Detail of Beta_000 in Harry Potter: Lost Son
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Writing quality is acceptable. Plot is chiched and a lot of information is dumped from the first chapter itself, making it a pain to read and remember. A nice attempt.
Harry Potter: Lost Son
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info dump on the first chapter, and a couple of them throughout the other chapters. Regardless I'm in chapter 16 and I have to say this is one the best harry Potter fanfics in this app. there are a lot of them, but I grow bored because there are nothing but info dumps. This one however is balanced out between plot, dialogue and making sure you don't get bored. I absolutely love it.