Review Detail of Moongoddess42 in The Broken Angel & Her Overprotective Brothers

The plot itself feels well thought out as the story progresses; however, there are times when reading the story becomes obstructed by bad grammar and repetitive phrasing. I just ask that the author stop using the word “moreover”. This single word is used at least twice in every chapter that I have read so far. Considering the fact that “moreover” is not a transitioning word commonly used when speaking, its continuous use feels incredibly out of place. Especially when such an old word is being used consistently by a seventeen year old girl. There are many more phrasing and grammatical errors that could be pointed out but this one is the most common. I do like the plot and would one hundred percent recommend.