Review Detail of Aeris_1357 in The Broken Angel & Her Overprotective Brothers

Very well written and extremely interesting! It wasn't what I was expecting, but I was pleasantly surprised. The entire world has an air of mystery that intrigues, while the characters make me care and want to stay involved. I feel like this story just needs a little polish - mainly minor editing/consistency fixes - and it would be be ready for bookshelf publishing. I'm looking forward to how this story unfolds!