Review Detail of Jo_J in Poisonous Lips

I have to admit - first time I read "Nigerian" story. Recently I also read (first time ;) ) typical japan story... There are a lot of differences between european, american, japan and nigerian "style of writing"... great to know something new ;) Your story has been written in a lovely way. No grammar or stylistic errors. The storyline is interesting, characters expressive. Well done! Keep writing!