Review Detail of JcPancakes in Poisonous Lips

A story of jealousy and betrayal, hmm. Writing Quality: The author uses a very unique writing style. I like the frequent usage of slangs like dey, tah, etc in the conversations, it gives an immersive atmosphere to the dialogues and introduces a piece of African culture. There are several minor mistakes but they're mostly unconsequential. Stability of Updates: Daily updates! 5 stars. Story Development: I find the story's pacing a little slow but it was balanced by the frequent swing of relationships between the characters, building suspense and surprise. Character Design: I really like the character dynamics between Cynthia and Shade. The two-faced of jealousy premise makes the story an interesting plot. The complementary characters like Joshua and Dele further accentuates the jealousy and the competitive nature of Cynthia. Very well done. World Background: The author introduces plenty of African culture through the interactions of the characters. For example, eating chicken and breaking its bones are a thing? And its a norm for the people to eat it that way but its considered rude. Hmm, I learnt some about the culture from there. There are similar titbits scattered throughout the story, emphasising the culture the author wishes to present.