Hello author San.. I'm writing this review aftr reading 40.ch of it... The pace of story development is good its not flash or snail pace.. A +1 Story needs some more polishing around the endges.. Like in grammar... Showing character emotions more in depth . **a good story always Needs ML pov view also... And u write Nathan pov till now in the story, a few times already that a good point .. Continue it plz.. It will make story more beautiful . I very much the The characters of story be it ML friend,family.. Are FL.. Ur story catch the attention of reader's.. And for being hooked to it plzzzzzzzzzz update chapter accord. schedule.... It's new now.. If can't update properly readers will lost interest and it's charm.. A lot excellent stories in original's WN.. Lost like that.. **the story is very good.. And beautiful everyone .. Give it a try.💜💜👍👍. **
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