Was honestly very excited for the first 40 or so chapters, unfortunately the story feels incredibly bogged down bu the terrible secret identity execution and the logical leaps such as “i want my wife to be successful on her own, so I’ll just support her behind her back to invalidate her efforts” I’m paraphrasing but it can’t help but feel like that. Even if you think the story would end if the mc were to reveal his identity you can’t justify dragging out unnecessary and mind numbing segments of character development for no reason. Overall: Strong start but i prefer reasonable characters and good pacing.
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