Review Detail of SolidFish in Ragnarok's Beginning

SHAMELESS 5-STAR AUTHOR REVIEW! This is my novel, and I hope that you all can enjoy my work! To be clear, I am not a professional author so there will be grammatical and spelling errors throughout the story, but I do appreciate pointing out said errors! They will help me learn and grow and (hopefully) improve the story for you, my readers. English is my first language, but I'm only human (unfortunately) and I make mistakes, so point them out for me please. This is my first attempt at a novel piece, so ANY and ALL advice and/or criticism is appreciated! On to the novel: The introduction will seem slow, because it is, but I urge you to read a couple more chapters to see if the story piques your interest. I worked hard to create a magical system that's interesting and complex. But, because my story has substance, our protagonist Fen won't learn about that system for a good while. I do have a general plan for the plot and the story, but minor shifts do occur within that plan occasionally. I'll do my best to implement that plan slowly, but, once again, I'm not the greatest writer in the world and so I would love criticism. There will be action, a lot of it (Advice and criticism please). There will be romance, and the protagonist won't be ignorant like some other protagonists, but it won't be the main plot point, and the story will be focused on other points. There will be, surprise, blood and violence. I also won't censor because I don't see the point. I update every 3 days, which doesn't seem like a lot, but that's because I write >2,500 words per chapter and I can't write that fast and that skillfully so quickly. I will write unique personalities, funny personalities, and annoying personalities, but, surprise again, I am not the best. Advice and criticism are ESSENTIAL if I want to improve, so if you as a reader want this story to improve leave a comment. You can even call me a terrible writer, but please leave constructive criticism, or else you'll just make me sad with no advice... But above all else: Please enjoy my light novel!