Review Detail of RJMidnight in Pieces of Sonder

I have to say, even though I do not like female lead stories, yours pulled me in. It was good and your words and writing style knows how to get people hooked. There are a few grammar mistakes, but they do not take from the story and not that recognizable unless someone is really looking extremely close. Your story is really good and very interesting, I sincerely enjoyed it: Keep up the good work!