Review Detail of Reighlyyy in Journey Of A Legend
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First of all, I would like to congrat the author for all the update and the writing quality. There isn't too much repeating and the reading is fluid. However I must say that I found the character design of All the characters without any exception absolutely tasteless , you can say that I'm quite harsh but it's the truth, there is no surprise or depth in any character. Then I find that this story is quite quick because I think the "Cultivation " system is extremely simple and make you wonder why all the world is at tier 4 or more, because it's extremely quick to advance and the fight don't seem difficult, you don't feel any struggle from the protagonist . Then I think come the weakest spot of this novel, the World background. I feel everything in the World revolve around the MC that, without him the rest of the World would be boring, we know 2 of the 5 great families from the start and they don't seem important at all, and the rest is blur. The problem is that you can't enter in the World of the author because nothing is explained, you feel left out. Those are the major lines of my criticism, if you read, you might feel them, omnipresent, behind what is described. That's why I don't feel confortable when reading this novel. There is room for improvement and potential. Now we only need the author to exploit this potential.
Journey Of A Legend
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Dear Reader I'm truly appreciated by your review and thank you very much for the criticism. First of all, what you have written is true. There was not so much world background only after the tournament arc will be there a small amount but that isn't true either. I will try to look for this problem as much as I can. Secondly the characters. I admit that also and will try to do something about it too. A lot of readers said this, that is why I always try to improve myself and hope I will achieve that too. after I finish the current arc which is around the Forbidden Lands, I will try to go deeper into the outer world and also the characters. Hope I can make you read my novel with much comfort from then on! Again thank you very much for your honesty!:)
Hello author, Thank you for your hard work and your response. I would like to apologize a bit because I write my review in the heat just after reading and without taking a moment to calm myself. As I said this story has potential and with enough time you will be able to exploit it, I am confident. I wish you good luck and I'll be back to read your work in several months / years to see the evolution. Have a really nice day :)