Review Detail of atlasflame101 in Supreme Human System
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Honestly , I feel betrayed . I read the synopsis and was in awe yet after the first chapter, Iam like tf is this .. utter bull shit , grammar is just horrible . I thought I could give this book another chance but it's just BAD ( if English isn't your first language it doesn't give u an excuse to write utter crap) . Tbh your paratha poem was also crap. The plot feels hollow , the world background is shady / random , your character design is horrible . SWOT analysis: strengths- plot sounds interesting due to synopsis , pulls in readers weaknesses: bad character design , hollow character personality, cringe moments opportunities: system novels are trending threats: book is doomed if author doesn't think it through ( now all this rant was just so that a fellow Indian can succeed đ , I will return when the author improves)
Supreme Human System
priya012
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priya012:Thanks, brother For helping me out, I know my English is bad, let say horrible. But about the story and character... Can you read the story up to 40 chapters and then tell me my mistakes. Because at the start, I made many mistakes but I think later I improved. Read if you have time, just wanting to know my mistakes in the later chapters.
Thanks, brother For helping me out, I know my English is bad, let say horrible. But about the story and character... Can you read the story up to 40 chapters and then tell me my mistakes. Because at the start, I made many mistakes but I think later I improved. Read if you have time, just wanting to know my mistakes in the later chapters.
I'm not some rich dude man, just a student from a middle-class family. However, with some effort, I have improved my grammar. At least read for 30 chapters. Afterward, you are free to comment.
knijn:why don't you get an editor if you think your grammar is bad?
oh i thought that if your novel is premium you could afford an editor since they aren't that expensive?
priya012:I'm not some rich dude man, just a student from a middle-class family. However, with some effort, I have improved my grammar. At least read for 30 chapters. Afterward, you are free to comment.
knijn:oh i thought that if your novel is premium you could afford an editor since they aren't that expensive?
knijn:oh i thought that if your novel is premium you could afford an editor since they aren't that expensive?
But it needs time, probably a month. After that, I can see how much money has accumulated and take it through the bank. ( Needs 200 dollars before you can take out moneyđ)
knijn:?? but your novel costs money to read?
rip that sucks if you think you need an editor i can do it for pretty cheap did it a bit on ********** before
priya012:But it needs time, probably a month. After that, I can see how much money has accumulated and take it through the bank. ( Needs 200 dollars before you can take out moneyđ)
knijn:rip that sucks if you think you need an editor i can do it for pretty cheap did it a bit on ********** before