First, if you use MTL to translate it please do edit and read it first before you posting it... it's really horrible.. And edit which part is a conversation and which part is a naration, use the damn quotes mark.. -,-" I dont understand a single bit of your story
DartLove
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LIKEI don't edit because I don't want to, but because I can't. I am not a native English speaker, and I know it very mediocre (even worse) and I can not understand what exactly my readers do not understand, because I do not see a specific problem, and it is not me such a lazy ass who is too lazy to do a rare thing, but the language barrier. So hold on until I learn English, or beta will not descend into my mortal fick... *)
DartLove:I don't edit because I don't want to, but because I can't. I am not a native English speaker, and I know it very mediocre (even worse) and I can not understand what exactly my readers do not understand, because I do not see a specific problem, and it is not me such a lazy ass who is too lazy to do a rare thing, but the language barrier. So hold on until I learn English, or beta will not descend into my mortal fick... *)