Review Detail of Rem_y_z in Samsara Online
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Let's start off with the positives. Unique storyline, characters, and decent plot development. A 5 for story development here. Main character also starts off really overpowered and seems to be the strongest person the world has ever seen, so that does appeal to some of the readers on this site. It falls down from here. Though non-English native speakers are quite common, this novel's grammar is a cut below the rest; often, words longer than three syllables will be completely butchered and grammatical structure leaves much to be desired here. 3 for this section. The character design, to me, has lots of room for improvement in terms of character development. Be it in classic literature or even in comics, character development is probably one of the three most important literary elements in any well-written novel. However, the main character starts off as strong and arrogant and stays strong and arrogant. The side chicks who happen to do nothing at all just become attracted and devoted and everyone other smut term you could find to our mc. 2 for character development. I'll be honest, I don't read this novel off of webnovel. It's not like me to spend money supporting an author I don't particularly admire. For that reason, I have no idea about the stability of updates. Finally, world background. This one is the worst. Straight off the bat you have the author claiming that steel is of a lower grade than iron and bronze. This is pretty dumb. Then you have the power rankings, in which God is ranked below saint. Straight off of Wikipedia, "In religious belief, a saint is a person who is recognized as having an exceptional degree of holiness or likeness or closeness to God." Makes little sense to have a worshipper of God above God himself. The author hasn't explained each region of the servers either. Though being Chinese-Canadian myself, I find it pretty annoying when China seems to be the centre of the Universe, and no other country even gets a mention (except for Russia). A flat one star from the start. Zero if there were an option. Finally, I don't like the author much. It's a classic example of humble to arrogant that is the star of so many cliched wuxia novels realized in the real world. Often, constructive criticism offering support within the first 50 chapters regarding logical fallacies and plotholes are either completely ignored or are met with the saltiest personality I've seen in these past few decades. Overall, a great novel if not for 1. Ignorance regarding background research, 2. Unchanging personalities, and 3. A better author. I will hope that this novel gets a copied adaptation from someone with a creative take.
Samsara Online
XIETIAN
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XIETIAN:Exactly. Goodbye, keep on being sustained while I slowly get rich xD
You clearly didn't read any of the novel. 5 chapters maybe? Secondary girls? You are so ignorant that you don't even know that only 3 girls appeared in 150 chapters, mentally retarded. You don't want to try to make logical reviews when you're based on pure lies. And yes, I'm arrogant, so what? Unlike you, supported by your family and without money to even buy coins, I work and earn thousands of dollars. Lazy and sustained. In fact, you even want them to copy my novale? Ignorant moron who doesn't know about something called DMCA.
It's cool! I have no intention of arguing with you here. After all, a novel review is based on the experiences of the reader, not the inflated ego of the author. Not everyone will love arrogance and not everyone will like your novel. I just happen to be one of those people. If you believe every action you take is flawless, then that is your entitled opinion.
XIETIAN:You clearly didn't read any of the novel. 5 chapters maybe? Secondary girls? You are so ignorant that you don't even know that only 3 girls appeared in 150 chapters, mentally retarded. You don't want to try to make logical reviews when you're based on pure lies. And yes, I'm arrogant, so what? Unlike you, supported by your family and without money to even buy coins, I work and earn thousands of dollars. Lazy and sustained. In fact, you even want them to copy my novale? Ignorant moron who doesn't know about something called DMCA.
Rem_y_z:It's cool! I have no intention of arguing with you here. After all, a novel review is based on the experiences of the reader, not the inflated ego of the author. Not everyone will love arrogance and not everyone will like your novel. I just happen to be one of those people. If you believe every action you take is flawless, then that is your entitled opinion.
Oh right, I forgot to add this earlier but you should really consider hiring an editor to smooth out the grammatical errors in your work since any grammar edits in the comments aren't accepted.
XIETIAN:Exactly. Goodbye, keep on being sustained while I slowly get rich xD
Forgot to add here that considering your personality, you are in no way obligated to accept my recommendation or even consider it. Don't want to you assume I am declaring war on your rich ego after all.
Rem_y_z:Oh right, I forgot to add this earlier but you should really consider hiring an editor to smooth out the grammatical errors in your work since any grammar edits in the comments aren't accepted.