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Not bad but far too many things author is trying to include at once, makes it almost unreadable when you won't let something finish before introducing another 10 different plot points. And that's just up to chapter 11
Fictional Chat Group - All-girls Only Edition
TetekGede
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Of course and I get that, however you'll randomly add things in and not explain them or explain them and they wont be used for a long time. I'm not saying the novel is bad by any means as I'm still reading and enjoying it (the clutter thin has gotten better over some chapters) but at one point so many things were being added at such a random pacing it was hard to read.
TetekGede:There are no actual plot in here since MC just do whatever she want
For that, I'm sorry added some random things. I may not remember it well which is it but that is indeed one of my bad habits. Maybe I will solve it later and not immediately since I following japanese light novel types of story telling, not chinese that always so fast. If you could, please, tell me which random things is it and I may take a look at that parts as well deciding what I should do with it.
ThisNovelSucksBro:Of course and I get that, however you'll randomly add things in and not explain them or explain them and they wont be used for a long time. I'm not saying the novel is bad by any means as I'm still reading and enjoying it (the clutter thin has gotten better over some chapters) but at one point so many things were being added at such a random pacing it was hard to read.
It's all good, your novel is very entertaining and I've been enjoying it a lot so far it was only those few things namely the mass amount of filler and countless plots being added 24/7. Other then those two things I think you're doing extremely well, keep up the good work
TetekGede:For that, I'm sorry added some random things. I may not remember it well which is it but that is indeed one of my bad habits. Maybe I will solve it later and not immediately since I following japanese light novel types of story telling, not chinese that always so fast. If you could, please, tell me which random things is it and I may take a look at that parts as well deciding what I should do with it.
Thank you very much for that. After all, I intend to write this as not serious fanfic, that's why it has some fillers.
ThisNovelSucksBro:It's all good, your novel is very entertaining and I've been enjoying it a lot so far it was only those few things namely the mass amount of filler and countless plots being added 24/7. Other then those two things I think you're doing extremely well, keep up the good work