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Excellent work! Many fanfics have a tendency to add immersion-breaking explanations or dialogues that seem off. In other words, they see themselves from "the author's point of view" and not the characters. This novel completely avoids that trap (so far at least), making it much more professional like. The conversations between the different characters is vivid and well described. The language itself is not impeccable, but close to flawless. Now onto the actual review: It is a very well written and very intriguing story. It is also very immersive, I can easily picture the scenes in front of me as I read. This could very well have been passed off as a true alternative story to the original in my opinion. I liked this very much, thank you for your work.

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The Lost Heir (A Harry Potter Fanfic)

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