Review Detail of MikXL_23 in Pokemon Tamer of Darkness

Well, after reading the first few chapters... I can't say I'm impressed. The premise is interesting, but the writing really could use some work. The lack of punctuation is painful to my eyes, and the story-telling is... Sorry to say it, but it is subpar at best. The MC is a reincarnated human that got the body of freaking Lelouch! And yet, he acts like some ******** weeb that keeps spouting japanese words (not that I mind, since I'm also a weeb, but still... It doesn't match Lelouch's character), I think it would've been better if him being a weeb was more of a secret that he hides from everyone... Release date seems consistent, can't say much about the plot and characters since there aren't that many chapters... Although Darkrai is surely my favorite character for now... I'm going to be a bit harsh with my review, author, so pardon me if I end up offending you. Since, I can barely find any decent pokemon fan-fics to read, and yours really has the potential ngl... I'm looking forward for your improvement!!