Review Detail of amaturewriter in DC: Becoming Something More Than Human

The first chp gained my interest, the second warmed my heart and the third, it was glorious. If u can keep this balanced and continue, this will be dope. Love the MC who is more towards the biological sciences, its cool. Biological modifications, weapons, DNA alteration, etc...so much potential. Interested. Smart MC is dope, moments of his intelliegnce and planning would be dope, also using his anime, comic knowledge. If romance just build it and dont make lovers useless sluts. And dont make MC a heroic retard. Suggestions: -cliche but building arc reactor would be benificial -killer croc and mr freeze, good minions. One was hated by society for his looks, another was cause of his lover if i am correct. Bane, maybe. Poison Ivy, depending on origin. -super soldier juice -magic -mutant abilities? -