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bitchlasagna
bitchlasagnaLv32yrbitchlasagna

bad writing and execution MC- my goal is for marine and world gov separation and destruction of w.g......few chapters later MC-heaven defying strength, how dare celestial dragon talk back to me, i will kill everyone, sakazuki? lets blatantly provoke him now that i have no haki and no actual power

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Transmigrated into One Piece world with a Gift Pack

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bitchlasagna
bitchlasagnaLv3bitchlasagna

still wont stop my pity towards your little *ss b*tch.....oh and my balls deep in yo mom

Jessie_Morris_3187:f you and your family you don't know art
Vostarian
VostarianLv4Vostarian

Sayandeimon
SayandeimonLv3Sayandeimon

Analiza mejor la historia, porque por lo que parece lo leíste de corrido sin tratar de comprender el idealismo del prota.

Artem_Lavrov
Artem_LavrovLv1Artem_Lavrov

this is the base

Jessie_Morris_3187
Jessie_Morris_3187Lv11Jessie_Morris_3187

F you this chapter is amazing

bitchlasagna
bitchlasagnaLv3bitchlasagna

I pity you, what horrible atrocities you must have read before to consider this garbage amazing

Jessie_Morris_3187:F you this chapter is amazing
Jessie_Morris_3187
Jessie_Morris_3187Lv11Jessie_Morris_3187

f you and your family you don't know art

bitchlasagna:I pity you, what horrible atrocities you must have read before to consider this garbage amazing
Shivam_Thakur_1883
Shivam_Thakur_1883Lv11Shivam_Thakur_1883

soo true this is very cringe story with stupidest mc ever..---- mc is---- justice lover , battle maniac(in worst possible way who always dies almost),huge emotional idiot who can't control emotion, very weak but talks big,always say he will kill celestrial but when target by them he shows mercy and only warns them,story is flat predictable with stupid author.....and mc is too much disappointment

Genn_stars
Genn_starsLv3Genn_stars

Art is subjective.

Jessie_Morris_3187:f you and your family you don't know art
NoobLord114
NoobLord114Lv6NoobLord114

lol 🤣 this is worse than even garbage

Jessie_Morris_3187:f you and your family you don't know art
Veasna_TDM
Veasna_TDMLv11Veasna_TDM

Agree, and that was the transition into HxH world, that why author write it like that, but it very sad, when author keep praising the mc are op, rightious, etc, but when it matter, the mc have to take a lose for the plot, getting nerf, character break, and all the negative necessary for it. It just ruined a story, and I seen it a lot in webnovel outside Chinese one. Not saying that Chinese novel are better, they are not. It just bad, when author put the mc in such a high expectation in the beginning to get reader hooked, but disappointed reader in later chapter.

Shivam_Thakur_1883:soo true this is very cringe story with stupidest mc ever..---- mc is---- justice lover , battle maniac(in worst possible way who always dies almost),huge emotional idiot who can't control emotion, very weak but talks big,always say he will kill celestrial but when target by them he shows mercy and only warns them,story is flat predictable with stupid author.....and mc is too much disappointment