bad writing and execution MC- my goal is for marine and world gov separation and destruction of w.g......few chapters later MC-heaven defying strength, how dare celestial dragon talk back to me, i will kill everyone, sakazuki? lets blatantly provoke him now that i have no haki and no actual power
FanficMortal
Liked by 138 people
LIKEbitchlasagna:I pity you, what horrible atrocities you must have read before to consider this garbage amazing
soo true this is very cringe story with stupidest mc ever..---- mc is---- justice lover , battle maniac(in worst possible way who always dies almost),huge emotional idiot who can't control emotion, very weak but talks big,always say he will kill celestrial but when target by them he shows mercy and only warns them,story is flat predictable with stupid author.....and mc is too much disappointment