Review Detail of bitchlasagna in Transmigrated into One Piece world with a Gift Pack
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bad writing and execution MC- my goal is for marine and world gov separation and destruction of w.g......few chapters later MC-heaven defying strength, how dare celestial dragon talk back to me, i will kill everyone, sakazuki? lets blatantly provoke him now that i have no haki and no actual power
Transmigrated into One Piece world with a Gift Pack
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bitchlasagna:I pity you, what horrible atrocities you must have read before to consider this garbage amazing
soo true this is very cringe story with stupidest mc ever..---- mc is---- justice lover , battle maniac(in worst possible way who always dies almost),huge emotional idiot who can't control emotion, very weak but talks big,always say he will kill celestrial but when target by them he shows mercy and only warns them,story is flat predictable with stupid author.....and mc is too much disappointment
Agree, and that was the transition into HxH world, that why author write it like that, but it very sad, when author keep praising the mc are op, rightious, etc, but when it matter, the mc have to take a lose for the plot, getting nerf, character break, and all the negative necessary for it. It just ruined a story, and I seen it a lot in webnovel outside Chinese one. Not saying that Chinese novel are better, they are not. It just bad, when author put the mc in such a high expectation in the beginning to get reader hooked, but disappointed reader in later chapter.
Shivam_Thakur_1883:soo true this is very cringe story with stupidest mc ever..---- mc is---- justice lover , battle maniac(in worst possible way who always dies almost),huge emotional idiot who can't control emotion, very weak but talks big,always say he will kill celestrial but when target by them he shows mercy and only warns them,story is flat predictable with stupid author.....and mc is too much disappointment