webnovel

Review Detail of WAIDH in Fate/Defiance (Old, Rewrite up!)

Review detail

WAIDH
WAIDHLv43yrWAIDH

Writing quality. I didn't see any mistakes and like the writing style. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Story development. It's only beginning of the story so I can't say anything but I like how it goes. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Character design. There is only MC. For now, I will give ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Updating stability. I want more. ⭐⭐⭐⭐ World background - Fate+Greek mythology.⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ In the end, I would like to say that I will be very disappointed if itwill become harem, because: 1)There are too many harem novel and most of them are obvious and boring. And this novel might become one of them. 2)I think it will be harder for author to write novel. Many female characters - all have their own perspective, feeling etc. Because of this it will be easier to make mistakes. 3)In my humble opinion, harem conflicts with MC's belief. As I understand, MC wants to become a hero. And hero in his eyes Is the one who make nearby people happy. But harem isn't actually a good thing. It can make both MC and FLs suffer... And I'm lazy to write about all harem's horrors.

Fate/Defiance (Old, Rewrite up!)

theMadLad

Liked it!

LIKE
empty img

No replies. Be the first!