Review Detail of Funky_fat_monk in Supremacy of Another World

I hope you dropped it then my friend. I can take constructive critism but making a fanfiction where the MC does not have insanely easy from the start is hardly idiotic. If he had brought the company, do you really think someone without any knowledge of the inner workings of that society, would be able to successfully lead a huge project like that? At most he could sponsor them and get some sort of compensation, but there is no way any game developer would just magic up a free character even for their sponsor. Finally, why would you do something so boring? Why not just grind it out considering you have 10 whole years of free time?

bro.. I dropped it already don't worry. mc is gonna go to other wotld, with whatever skills he has in game. so, him having broken game character is useful for whatever he want to do in other world, since that will be his power. and bro, when it is your company you can just create or make anything in the game, since it's your company. as for developer you just have to make it so, you will use not use it create an unbalace the game. it will be lot of time for him , so, he can indeed play what ever he want. but at the end if he owns the game he can create whatever broken cheats he wants..that is use of money, if not what the heck man ?? till then he can play normally if he wants it will be his company if he bought it bro. so, I definitely dropped this ff. don't worry I will not read this.

Fine by me my friend, it wasn't your cup of tea and that's fine. I just do not like the idea of him having to put little to no effort into his character, other than coding it in. In my opinion, all of my genned characters where I have given myself stuff in game, I have formed no attachment or deeper fondness for it. That would be an issue to me considering it would become his body soon, thus it should feel just as precious as anyone else's if not more. Then there is the case of balance. I understand that if its his game he can do whatever he wants, but if the games balance is destroyed then the player base will leave. Therefore if he's running around with a maxed out character on day one, then expect the player base to drop

yeah , whatever bro..cool

Thank you for the advice. I honestly forgot you could delete reviews ahahaha The cover takes 2 minutes but I at least want to add in the appropriate text so I will hunt around for a font like Overlords actual font and then upload it. I will probably do it tomorrow as its 3:30am and I am still up doing one of the future chapters ahahaha

Also this is a wish-fulfillment fanfiction, it says so in the sypnosis, leave the Author with his AMAZING story

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what is this drama .. where righteous dude express support for author and slaps the face of another reviewer 👏👏👏 get a job or something than do this to write some review to attract loosers like u to like your comment u doofus. it's a waste ff and it is just that. but you !! have you pointed out anything other than comment on my review ?? see that itself shows its worth. and author don't act like " oh I don't know we can delete review !!? " , you know it , we know you know it !! so if u want ,u can delete this or let it be a reminder for you to stop this drama and write a goddamn nice ff than this shiitstrom here.

Hey lil biitch iam talking about you point anything about this ff, since you can't even understand this much ,then you are dumbass same as gif you posted. don't post this useless reviews anymore dumbass, your sorry existence will be remembered by your father ,since he accidentally shot you in your mother ...😑😑 so..don't remind us of you..ok looser !!

replying to people like you is a waste of time in itself and you commenting about me being indian ?? what the heck is that.. you are really a child or probably a manchild. you got so riled up that.. you made up some shit story about yourself, as if anyone would believe that shiit.. laughable. child go home and suck you mom's tiits and calm the fuuck down ok ! this is the last reply, I will give you looser. and deluding yourself about your gf and all that. if by some miracle, there is a gf for you. just by seeing your and your childish ranting , we can conclude you are a big manchild, she probably put a green hat on you already !! conclusion ; you are just some another looser and I have free time to consider replying to a lil biitch like you. you are probably a ugly **** with lot more inferiority complex , who projects his sorry existence this way on net !! so, bye looser. even if you continue to rant after this, I will not waste my time on you !!

"The readers aren't blind, whether a book is good or not isn't something that can be affected just because someone scolded about it, right? A good book isn't afraid of scoldings, and bad books don't have scoldings." -A wise translator-

Thas a very good point.

Your opinions my friend. For the record, I genuinely didn't know you could delete reviews, after all that would deny the point of reviews as a whole. As I said to the person before, it may be shitstorm, but its my shitstorm. You are not obligated to read it, neither will I change it.

and then chapter 3 is ending

It would kinda serve him to leave it in for such reasons... It makes it look like all negative reviews are bad reviews... And that is the reason I think he should perhaps delete it. Now on the side of that, it's something someone might dislike about it, and so it is a valid review. It just has very little of substance to complain about, as far the writing goes. I will now get into it, and find out if there might be something more to his review - No matter how badly written said review was.

Having read a bit, I can see what you mean... He actually knew he would become the character he played, yet did not give himself every advantage he could... You should have mentioned that in the review... So going by this: Sorry author, that is incredibly unrealistic... What human, about to go into a brutal world like Overlord, wouldn't first give themselves EVERY fkn advantage they could? I would set the system to have no real limits on my character, allow for endless improvements, add countless options, and put myself WAAAY above any player in the game. I'd make myself a god to them. Giving him so much money, was a huge mistake. You gave him the ability to perform better in the setting he was given, and then had him perform to a lackluster level. Sorry, but the man makes a very good point. Even if you argue that he would want something to do when he got there, just taking over development to add more possibilities and maybe give himself an advantage, is a strong counter-argument for that. It just doesn't hold water anymore. I would like to rewrite this, stopping him from being able to do so. Just add in a line from the cosmic entity, where it puts down some ground rules to stop it. Or decrease the amount of cash he's got.

reading drama like this is what makes my day

Gggggg

yes, that's the reason i don't give a high rating, i like how you explain what's in my heart without me needing that much comment....