Review Detail of RJMidnight in Eein Saga

I’m not much for female lead stories but I do love dark stories. Dark stories are my favorite. Your story is really good and captivating but the problems are grammar and the introduction of so many characters overwhelmed me, I was lost for a second on who the MC was. On one sentence, you accidentally went first person point of view and please remember to break up the paragraphs sometimes. Other than those problems your story is going really well and you pacing is on point. Keep up the good work!