With our mc falling into an arranged marriage with a handsome man, it sounds like a typical Chinese novels I used to read as a kid. This is a solid plot with good potential. However, I would add that I needed more intrigue in the beginning. Maybe something to draw me in, something completely different from other Chinese novels since I personally enjoy action scenes. I can tell the curse as well as how to break it is the main intrigue, but I felt like it could have been put a bit better to catch my interest from the get go. Again, this is my opinion, and you don’t need to change the storyline just for me. Another issue is the misplaced commas and run-on sentences I am seeing, which is a common error for everyone. I would suggest combing through the chapters after posting to spot them. All in all, it is a great romance book ! So don’t get discouraged Author and keep up the good work !
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