Review Detail of tuba_san in Dragon Ratio

As a part of my new honest review swap policy, I will not hold back. This novel is based in a magical universe where people can have summons and cast spells. The story's protagonist is an ostracized boy who is the son of a hero. He is looked down upon by others for using his father's name to get his position. Honestly since the story is just beginning, this is all that has been established. Surely as the story progresses we'll see more characters, get more backstory for the MC and it'll get more interesting. Unfortunately the grammar is this novel is not good at all. Although the author uses the correct words which is a very important aspect of writing, the tenses are all over the place. And this pattern repeats to the point that it can be painful to read. This novel has a lot of potential and if the author wants to genuinely make this novel succeed they'd have to fix the grammar. That is my advice to the author and I hope they'll take figure something out.