I get the feeling that the MC's character is well rounded and the story is progressing very well. But I am stopping reading this after 6chapters or so as I don't like the way the story is told. Quite frankly, the MC comes across to me as very flat. With flat I mean that while reading the story I don't feel moved at all. I am not feeling sad that the MC used to be an orphan, I don't feel happy that he now has a loving mother, etc. I feel absolutely nothing, leading me to feel bored after a few chapters.
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