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GRIDLOCK
GRIDLOCKLv113yrGRIDLOCK

Its actually pretty fuckin good, it has good jokes. But the bad part on this novel is that the author made the mc a bumbling idiot in the world of attracting females. Even weebs and gamers know what NOT do do and say to females, its just weird to read. I know there are people out there that are like the mc, but he is a college student, and he already had instances with females like when he said that he had a girlfriend at 13 or something and kissed some girls. Its like he evolved WAAAAAAAAAY backward at that fallout time when he became a weeb and gamer. But all in all, a good read, i recommend 👍

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My Pick Up Artist System

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GRIDLOCK
GRIDLOCKLv11GRIDLOCK

And also the looks of the mc (exept height and all the complicated stuff). That stuff shouldve been fixed in the first like 15 chapters and so. Dont just milk the hair and stuff. It gets stale after a few mentions. (im at chap 30 so idk if it gets fixed in the next chaps)

SamsaraWithWords
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Also, thanks for the review