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Review Detail of LPummill3 in The Zombie System

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LPummill3
LPummill3Lv133yrLPummill3

It feels really forced and makes no sense. the grammer is ok at best. The way the mc and the other characters act is so robotic i dont recommend.

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The Zombie System

dipforthechips

Liked it!

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dipforthechips
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I see... I will try working on this. Thanks for the review anyways as all criticism is appreciated 😁