Review Detail of stinkclaw in Evolution of the Skeleton who walked alone in a Dungeon

Item: Evolution of the Skeleton who walked alone in a Dungeon
Rating: 5

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stinkclawLv143yrstinkclaw

So many people do this style of story but no one seems to see it through except 1 author I hope this one will make it to two authors. otherwise good job so far, make sure to put in a touch of insanity from loneliness, just a touch.

Evolution of the Skeleton who walked alone in a Dungeon

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MuhammadAsyrafLv3MuhammadAsyraf

which novel you mean? that one author

3yr

stinkclawLv14stinkclaw

Now that of read more I'm gonna give you some constructive criticism. add some more detail to your story because while I like the direction it's going but it's a little fast. throw in some place and people descriptions just to slow the pace a little.

3yr

stinkclawLv14stinkclaw

im talking about the story "unwanted undead adventurer" you can't find it here and I got lucky to listen to it for free on YouTube.

MuhammadAsyraf:which novel you mean? that one author

3yr