Review Detail of FatEmperor in While Others Cultivate, I LVL UP In My Sleep Using The Dungeon System

It has a good premise, but like many other novels, it gets ruined by a badly designed protagonist. There are also many plot holes. For instance, Hunter's Mind, a passive that limits his emotions so he can remain calm. It stops working randomly, because the MC still start crying for no reason, scream out in shock or just generally overreact to any little thing. It should by default also negate the negative aspects of his bloodlust characteristic, but it doesn't work there either. Overall, that thing only works when the author feels like it should, which just makes it annoying. Protagonist is weak as hell. He's also stupidly paranoid for no reason. My guy really thinks that smartphones can be tracked by anyone at will, but non-smartphones can't be used for tracking. They track your phone through cell towers, my guy. In other words, if you make a call, you get tracked. Doesn't matter if you have a smart or dumb phone. And this MC considers himself intelligent... Features you would consider basic for a system requires a vast amount of resources to unlock, so aside from improving his stats, the system can't do anything else for him. Basically nothing in this novel makes sense. Everyone acts super freaking weird. Like what kind of sportswear store even has ex-military bouncers to keep people who look poor out? What is this, ancient china? If the protagonist wasn't so stupid, weak and paranoid, the novel might be more palatable...