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Review Detail of herbert in While Others Cultivate, I LVL UP In My Sleep Using The Dungeon System

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Its pretty good, I just noticed that you’re missing question marks and exclamation points in the places they belong. Without them you cant really tell the MCs tone of voice. I dont know if you fixed this because I haven’t read too far yet

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While Others Cultivate, I LVL UP In My Sleep Using The Dungeon System

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