Review Detail of Pretend in Water&Rain Don't Mix
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I would give this a three tho I give it two due to me finding this through your self-promo. So- let's get started, the grammar is in between horrible and subpar and it shows the author's lack of experience with writing. The update rate is pretty decent from what I can tell, a small mini-hiatus is happening. Story development-wise, this story sucks, I suppose some could like it, but for me, it feels lacking in emotion and storytelling. The world-building/background felt extremely lacking for me and I could not understand several things and the plot is incredibly rushed. Moral of the story: Shameless self-promoting author, bad grammar, the story development felt lacking and was hard to enjoy or keep up with, relatively stable update schedule, and finally- really sucky world building TLDR: I would not recommend it.
Water&Rain Don't Mix
pboca
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Even though it's not a good one i still appreciate your review... I always try to improve wherever I can, so I am sorry for any mistakes. If you have any suggestions I would love to hear them... and sorry about the small hiatus... I'm going to be honest I hadn't thought of coming this far thus I haven't thought out yet how to continue... and also simply not having enough time for work, myself and this hobby. I wanted my efforts in writing this to give some fruit that is why i self promoted, even though it didn't help much ;-; And as you said I am really inexperienced and just wanted to write for the fun of it and not for profitable reasons therefore I won't charge anyone to read the novel and I won't sign any stupid contracts. I only wanted people to enjoy this like I was enjoying to write it.
pboca:Even though it's not a good one i still appreciate your review... I always try to improve wherever I can, so I am sorry for any mistakes. If you have any suggestions I would love to hear them... and sorry about the small hiatus... I'm going to be honest I hadn't thought of coming this far thus I haven't thought out yet how to continue... and also simply not having enough time for work, myself and this hobby. I wanted my efforts in writing this to give some fruit that is why i self promoted, even though it didn't help much ;-; And as you said I am really inexperienced and just wanted to write for the fun of it and not for profitable reasons therefore I won't charge anyone to read the novel and I won't sign any stupid contracts. I only wanted people to enjoy this like I was enjoying to write it.
That's ok, I appreciate your honesty even though I am aware of the things you said... And again i forgot to mention but English isn't my main language sooooooooooooooooo.... I try my best and sorry.
Pretend:Sorry about the bad review, thought I would share my honest thoughts tho