Review Detail of pboca in Water&Rain Don't Mix

Hi, just wanted to say thank you for all the amazing reviews everyone has been giving me so far including the ones that aren't written here below me. It's my first shot at writing for real and I am dedicating myself as much as I can to this and I love to have critical but constructive comments about my work and if you think something doesn't make sense or you need something explained or you think I should change something any suggestions I am open to all of these. If you have anything to say just, you know send me a message either on here or Instagram or discord whichever you prefer and it's easier for you! heck, you can even e-mail me for all I care and I will still reply to you! <3 Hugs and Love, pboca.