My guy good job, you made mistakes in story but people got way too angry for it even devil hex- bro your novel is great but let others follow their dream, as a reader we need to take on author's eyes to read. I saw too many negative comments that's why i reviewed. If you all saw so much negative stuff how the hell new authors come up with story if they fear negativity to come in such bulk Stop it and get a life Read novel to enjoy not to criticize.
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