Review Detail of Dann_Giovanni in Lightning's Attraction

Lightning's attraction is a book of fiction made by Henry_Hyren. The main audience of the story are cultivator fans and anyone who's in love with the genre. The story is told in a good way of narration that I've personally fallen in love with. What I like about the book is the creativity spent to think of unique Chinese names. (Maybe because I don't read these kind of novels, hehe.) Even now, I couldn't pronounce their names properly, The flaws of the book includes some grammatical mistakes that could be easily fixed with proofreading. Word choice is great, but I've noticed some words were used repeatedly such as cower in fear. Character design is is also a flaw as it lacked descriptions of various characters aside from apparel. I was able to picture the scenarios clearly, so this will cover up for the CD. That is all I could criticize about, the rest are great. Overall, it was an interesting read. -Dann Giovanni