Review Detail of DaisukiDayoSenpai in Lightning's Attraction
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A great cultivation book! I highly recommend this one. I'll try to review this book with no spoilers xD. Basically, you get two choi.. oof! Alright, seriously now. The book start off a bit heavy for me since there was too much information. Well, this is expected for a cultivation novel. The overall pacing is alright, you just have to improve on the smoothness of the story. I don't know how to put it but there were parts that sound a bit broken like it doesn't really flow that much. But well, that's just my gut feeling so don't mind it too much. I really enjoyed it! I hope you keep updating since this novel is promising! Keep it up! ^ ^
Lightning's Attraction
Henry_Hyren
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No worries ^ ^ I've probably read too much cultivation novels that I got used to their progression. One of the things I found on the high-ranked cultivation novels is their release of information. Don't release too much nor too little and I think your book will flow more smoothly. That's just my opinion though. Your book is already amazing as it is :))
Henry_Hyren:I will try my best to improve, Thanks for the advice, I really needed that. I hope that in the future, u can give more comments for me to improve on