I think it's a pretty good novel overall, I think that the character design especially is pure 5 stars. I liked how the scenes are full of detail as well, I think the story isn't slow either, it could be a bit faster but it's solid and everything that happens around them is well explained (example chapter4 fight had really good set up) Now the thing that confused me was the daoist titles, especially in chapter 3 i was like, who is this guy is he the prince Yun or Jin Lixing, but you explained it in the end, however it had me confused for a while. Aside from that, the overall quality is very good and I would 100% read more if you update it continuously
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