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Okay, this got me interesting from the start but you have your potential as a writer and you have this title impactful! Your story has this kind of confusion and thriller combined with that mystery of love or realism in it. It's really good actually! I have only one suggestion to keep the readers immense to your story. That is to give them a brief overview of what the novel is about. Your synopsis is kinda like a quote from the MC or a villain. Write two sentences with a wonderful premise in it so that it may click the readers in. I also write in that way back then, but I am saying this what I have learned. (Please, don't hate me). Lovelots, author!

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How far would you go for a wish? (Ver.0)

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Any feedback is good feedback to me... unless it's something like "This shit sucks." In that case, I'll probably ask for a 5 mark answer on why the story sucks. Yeah, all I'm saying is thanks for the feedback.