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I read 8 chapters so far... I like the story! It's easy and nice to read. No grammar and stylistic errors. The story line is interesting, characters expressive! There is just one thing that bothers me... I am a conservative reader/writer ;) I like to read books written by narrator in 1st of 3rd person points of view. When people mix it - it looks messy, but that's only my opinion. When I will get a "power stones" - you will get one from me ;)