Review Detail of ONEPUNCH in My Hero Academia: Kaguya's rebirth

Well.... its a interesting story but the major drawback of this fanfic is just... seriously author. please add spaces 😂 add a space between dialogs, dont lump it together with the narration. Give it more "beauty" in the writing. and while its still just 12 chapters, do please correct ur sentences as some words are repeated. for example "that got that". I am very looking forward to this fanfic :)